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Mr. Brightside by SilverSonic44

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This is very good!
I'll deliver what could be fixed first, then some of the things that are amazing after.
The renderment of the cats' bodies are very good. The few things I'd recoment being fixed would be that you make the elbow of the cat hugging the other, wider. The tail of the cat leaning against the other should either have more dimention added to it, or it could be laying sideways to the right, the opposite way the cat is leaning towards. It's just a more natural position. The last thing would be that the cat closest to us should have his head just a BIT more connected to his shoulders, meaning you could probably fill the rest of that gap on the left side underneith his chin, with fur. This would just show that he's slouching a bit better, and would again, connect his head to his shoulders a bit more realisticly in the position that he's in.
Now, for the comments on things that pop!
This is REALLY good, even with the character's colorations, due to the fact that you've not read the books!
The bodies' proportions are perfect, the grass matches the style of the drawing, the moonlight looks INCREDIBLE! The shine makes is look as though we're looking through a camera, which adds to the fact that this is a fake TV show screenshot! The text again, adds to it looking like subtitles, which is great! The shadows and highlights are really great, and are smoothly transitioned so that they look very natural.
You've done an AMAZING job with this piece! I hope you find my critique helpful!
Great work!
~Silverfang98
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SilverSonic44 Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Woaaah. This critique was INCREDIBLY helpful. I know I've made a lot of mistakes here, and the idea of art is to keep on improving! Thank you so much! <3
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Silverfang98 Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you liked it! It's fun to do critiques, especialy knowing that they help out other artists! It'd be nice if more people actualy did them though...XD
I'm sure you will! No problem!
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